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The first of what will probably be a few entries to the Kick your own ass competition, the purpose of which is to re-do an older deviation to show your progress, you don't need the most mind-blowing new work, just to show the most significant improvement over time, hopefully I have, or the past 135 weeks and 6 days of practicing have been a BIG waste of my precious youth that could have been spent outside frollicking in the sun! :lol:

The old one on the left is here [link] for the record - up until I submitted this entry and the new version which is here [link] - it had gained only 13 comments and 23 favourites...Proof that even good artists have to start off with poor quality art that gets poor amounts of comments and faves, never get too discouraged, just keep on practicing! :aww:

Having said that, I have a ways to go, particularly in terms of characters since there's the added issue of getting correct anatomy and perspective. There are some parts of the new version I'm still not fully fond of, but I spent long enough on that already and all that matters is that it's considerably better than the old one :#1:

mandatory information for contest

Category - Digital art (both are 2D illustrations, no 3D or photo's used in either!)

Self critique:
Still struggling with correct anatomy and proportions, my progress in learning that is slower than my progress in many other aspects of art such as light colour and finding a nice composition. But in all fairness - human figures are hard to draw especially if you are like me and they only make up one of many different things you like to draw, they would be much easier and faster to do for the many that only do this sort of stuff. Still can't see myself making any money off character deisgn or illustration, my skills are strongly tied to scenery instead, but I love this sort of fantasy-character stuff and want to improve in this too :)

Artwork and character designs are made and copyrighted by me, please do not steal my images

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:iconmasterofgeckos:
WOW there is some epic improvement between the pictures, particularly with the background and the wings :D

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:icontrzysz:
differences can be seen here ;)
great progress :D
:iconpriteeboy:
Thankyou, I didn't realise how terribly flat the wings looked on the original until I compared them to the newer version :floating:

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:iconaiyai:
Wow..I can see the great improvement! Your background is more detailed and your character is more defined and well shaded ^^ !

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:iconwerewolfman2:
I agree with the above post, your work tends to look amazing as is, but seeing vast improvements as this just gives me more to look forward to when thinking about your future pieces.
:iconblazeofwar:
Wow, your shading, backgrounds, hair, anatomy, accessories, still-life... Just everything has EPICLY improved, especially the Background.:O

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:iconlinkslove:
Thats a very drastic improvement! Her feet look a little weird, and her chest looks a tad awkward (to be fair though, you ARE a guy), but otherwise, everything looks amazing, especially the hair, and of course, the background. :D

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:iconkeelerleah:
Your ability to paint backgrounds (clouds and scenery) improved immensely looking at these two shots. The level of detailing is also a great improvement as well, as is your general use of colors and shading with them.

People will always be difficult for anyone and as you said above, its all about practice, and in the last years you have improved greatly.

Great job and good luck in the contest! :)

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:iconpriteeboy:
That's what I wanna hear :boogie: improvements in both the background AND character :D (though I think I have gone a bit further in backgrounds, I'll likely make a landscape entry later ;p)

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:iconpriteeboy:
Thanks a lot! great art is great, but only an arrogant artist will stop trying to improve and that's one thing I'm always hoping to do :D it's getting hardrer to top each peice as I get better though :phew: I think many artists to have a limit that they begin to plateau at - hopefully I'm not at mine yet :ohnoes:

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