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The first of what will probably be a few entries to the Kick your own ass competition, the purpose of which is to re-do an older deviation to show your progress, you don't need the most mind-blowing new work, just to show the most significant improvement over time, hopefully I have, or the past 135 weeks and 6 days of practicing have been a BIG waste of my precious youth that could have been spent outside frollicking in the sun! :lol:

The old one on the left is here [link] for the record - up until I submitted this entry and the new version which is here [link] - it had gained only 13 comments and 23 favourites...Proof that even good artists have to start off with poor quality art that gets poor amounts of comments and faves, never get too discouraged, just keep on practicing! :aww:

Having said that, I have a ways to go, particularly in terms of characters since there's the added issue of getting correct anatomy and perspective. There are some parts of the new version I'm still not fully fond of, but I spent long enough on that already and all that matters is that it's considerably better than the old one :#1:

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Category - Digital art (both are 2D illustrations, no 3D or photo's used in either!)

Self critique:
Still struggling with correct anatomy and proportions, my progress in learning that is slower than my progress in many other aspects of art such as light colour and finding a nice composition. But in all fairness - human figures are hard to draw especially if you are like me and they only make up one of many different things you like to draw, they would be much easier and faster to do for the many that only do this sort of stuff. Still can't see myself making any money off character deisgn or illustration, my skills are strongly tied to scenery instead, but I love this sort of fantasy-character stuff and want to improve in this too :)

Artwork and character designs are made and copyrighted by me, please do not steal my images

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~DRS2406 Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Now it´s three years later again,dude....................................................................................................dude.........................
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:iconarbalester:
Mood: Wow! ~Arbalester Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hope I'll make such progress as you did :)
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:iconpriteeboy:
`priteeboy Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And I'm still going too, I already don't like the remade version anymore...People weren't afraid to point out its many flaws...which I guess is good since it helps me realize what I need to improve sooner than I otherwise would :plotting:

You could progress this much, especially during the earlier attempts where most of the primary learning is done, it's almost like an exciting journey of discovery, that's why I still keep a lot of my old works :aww:
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:iconmako666:
Wow this is awesome! The first one is very good, but the new one is amazing. I can definitely see your progress. Great job!
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:iconpriteeboy:
`priteeboy Apr 2, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I still don't really like either, both are riddled with anatomy flaws, but the earlier version is still much more worse than the recent :laughing: ignoring anatomy issues - I do like everything else about the current one, I was proud of my detaling and shading at least :deviation:
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:iconmako666:
Don't feel bad about anatomy issues.. you are much better at it than I am.
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~InfiniteFruit Dec 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
.....Did you happen to get your manga references from the book "How To Draw Anime and Game Characters: Mastering Battle & Action Poses" by Tadashi Ozawa? :O_o:
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`priteeboy Dec 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I saw a picture of that book advertised in the cover of another one I had, though mine had a differnet Author. I think the one your'e referring to is correct but I could never find the actual book itself in store so I don't have it :(
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~InfiniteFruit Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. I've got "How To Draw Manga: Illustrating Battles" by Hikaru Hayashi. That other book is in the cover of my book, too. ...I wish I could get "Battle and Action Poses," though. :(
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`priteeboy Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:lmao: the one you have is the only one I have! :omg: I saw it in the cover of that one too. The Battles one I bought way back in 2003 I think :faint: I wish I could find the poses and anatomy one :nod:
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